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Re: An ode to sarcasm
This was great! I think sarcasm is something you're born with and that it isn't brought out in one until one reaches middle school!
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: Guilt
I'd have to agree with the first review. I like this and I don't even know why, and I like that it made me like that! I also agree that ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
So is the Twilight series worth reading?
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: Curled Heart
I liked this. It was short, cool, and to the point. This line kinda bothered me though, b/c I felt it could've been better within the context of the whole ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: What's the weirdest book you've ever read?
The Origin of Species by Charles Darwin
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Suicide
Good flow, nice writing. Nice writing, especially in 3 minutes! The only problem I had with the poem was that google ads put two links for suicide prevention watch as ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: That Little Fog Inside: A Man Who Has Just read a story by
The story is called "A Little Cloud" by James Joyce in his short story collection Dubliners!
Aug 2, 2008 -
Re: Before I Go To Bed
This is really good. I didn't stop once in reading it, even with the length. Nice flow, good usage and choice of words. "In stripey pink" Loved that. Nice inventiveness ...
Aug 2, 2008 -
Re: Your Brain
Yeah this sounded like some opening dialogue to some pretentious indie film. Not feeling it sorry. Don't assume your reader is dumb.
Aug 2, 2008 -
Re: Incubus
I'd have to agree with the other critiques in reading them, but other than those small things this is a very interesting and vivid poem.
Aug 1, 2008